Electric Barrier Reviews

So, the 3rd chapter of the Omori manga adaptation has been released, and I've just finished reading it.  I already thought the second chapter was an improvement, though I did have some issues here and there. I thought that was simply because it was adapting mostly Headspace segments, which I don't care about it getting right as much. However, it's doing a pretty good job at adapting the Faraway Town portion of the story as well now. At the end of chapter 2 it switched the order of events, with Aubrey throwing away the photo album before the church scene, which I think is a change for the worse. This carries over into causing issues for this chapter as well.  But first I'll say I don't dislike the alternate version of getting Kim to tell the boys where Aubrey is. Instead of them trying to tell Kim and Vance to tell them where Aubrey is, prompting them to challenge them to a fight for the info, Sunny helps Kel set up a kick shot with an empty soda can that he was try

      I read the first chapter of Omori and uh... I have some notes... I wanted a gif of a guy plopping a huge stack of papers down on a desk  but I couldn't find one, so here's the next best thing.   Yeah I know it's been a while, I made sure this was done before the second chapter came out but I was busy playing Touhou Mystia's Izakaya and Final Fantasy VII Rebirth.     Before we get into it my criticisms, there's something outside of it, surrounding it that we have to talk about. Well, I guess we don't have to, but I'm going to.   Perhaps apt for Omori, there's a SHOCKING TRUTH about the author of the manga! WOAH! It's something no one could have possibly foreseen, and once you find out you'll be TRULY SHOCKED. Get this. The author, of the Omori manga, previously drew...   Shota BL comics!!!   THERE WAS NO WAY OF TELLING THIS, CERTAINLY NOT FROM HER ARTSTYLE! AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!   And boy do I not care. So don't think that,